Mario and Angry Birds team up!

by awesomeness1242

There are not currently any tags associated with this game.

Description

This is my first storygame, so please give me some tips on how to make it better. This story is simply The Super Mario Bros. meeting the Angry Birds. Please comment!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 13 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 81 times and finished 18 times since 2/14/2012

Comments

really stupid. Make the options not entirely random and the game was short

-- betaband
5/5/2012 9:21:17 PM:

The story in itself was good. I think the ending could have been a little more extravigant.

-- AntonioBurch
4/16/2012 1:45:15 PM:

I liked the idea, and your pages had at least a little meat to them. It wasnt' a bad story by any means, but that doesn't mean it deserves a high rating either.

All in all, a decent first try 4/8

-- ThisisBo
2/17/2012 5:59:14 PM:

just because something is original doesn't make it good. Combineing things doent make it original either. this just screams no imagination. You could've done science to magic and everything inbetween. I am disappoint that you didnt fly with a better concept. I understand that this is your first and you need to learn the controls before you pilot a ship, but you just plowed it into a coral reef. The concept is the foundation of a story. Without being a good solid one the entire house crumbles. I liked the effort though. My adivce is to read other stories on here with top ratings and go on from there.

-- alienalpha
2/15/2012 9:16:34 PM:

Not that bad. You had a good choice of options and I liked the originality of the whole thing. The parts I didn't like where the spelling and the narration was confusing at times. It was also a little short.

All in all, not bad.

4/8

-- JMgskills
2/15/2012 10:48:13 AM:

[1 More Comment]